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So, here's the first chapter. I'd really appreciate it if you would correct any grammar errors there ^^.
Also, let me know what you think, even if it's not that positive feedback.

Introduction chapter :pointr:[link]
Chapter 2 :pointr: [link]

And a little back-up story about the names used (in order of appearance) :
Aithne is of Celtic origin and means little fire.
Lann is also of Celtic origin and means sword.
Tankkis, mann Demaro means 'Thank you, my Mother'. Aithne here refers to Mother Nature. I originally used Welsh for this sentence, until I figure out the language in Adalardo kingdom. Now, when I make names of the cities, rivers and ponds, I mix few languages. Though Welsh sounds beautiful. :heart:
Conall (Celtic) means as strong as a wolf.
Shayla (Celtic) means fairy palace. It is a rather big town in the Brites kingdom (next to Anwell). The town is famous for its healers and medical care.
Tryne (Dutch!) means pure.
Gavin (Celtic) means little hawk. I picture him as a rather funny and wise old man. :aww:
Farrell (Celtic, duh) means the valorous one.


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~Deadly-Wanderer Jan 31, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Featured! [link]
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=IsoldeColleen Feb 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :heart: :aww:
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*SpiritTigar Oct 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OOOH MYY GOSHH!! :love: I love your book to death!! It soounds so amazing!! Dont stop writing nEVER EVER! I think I like conall he is like: :strong: haha cant wait for the next part! When you publish this i will be the first on in the store! And there is a few errors but thats what happens when you write alot!!
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=IsoldeColleen Oct 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha I'm glad you like it :D
Thanks for encouraging me, most of the books I start writting end up being deleted...but not this one, I promise! I love it too much to just throw it away!
I'm not sure about the publishing though...although I might print several copies and sell them online ^^. And for the errors, I see them only after I upload them. Oh well...I'm planning to give it to my English teacher to review it anyway :D.

Thank you so much! :heart:
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*SpiritTigar Oct 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You should! THIS IS JUST AN AWESOME BOOK!
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=IsoldeColleen Oct 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :D :glomp:
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*SpiritTigar Oct 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D :hug: :squee:
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